Beshoff’s, O’Connell Street

Oft-cooked fats and oils
Stink the air, catch in my throat,
Make it hard to breathe.

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2 Responses to Beshoff’s, O’Connell Street

  1. Hannah says:

    THATS NOT A HAIKU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  2. admin says:

    Seeing as you feel so strongly about it, I’ve updated line 1 to 5 syllables by changing many to oft.

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